Welcome to Keith Farrell’s new story, Slave 165.
On March 15th, 2015, slavery had come into effect in Scotland. There had been many political squabbles about human rights up until these human rights had been removed at the beginning of March 2015. This story is about the first person to be enslaved.
Enjoy!
Looking forward to reading this new story.
SO WHERE ARE THE TWO CHAPTERS?
SMOKEY
There should be two places you can go if you are using a mobile device. Either at the top or the very bottom should be the word chapters. Click on that word and it should take you to a table of contents for the story.
Hi,
A great start. I like the way Graeme is coming around, and how it seems to be a good thing that he was sentenced this way (which I have mixed feelings about) to become a slave. The humiliation seems to be working on him and he is also lucky to have a kind master that is allowing him to grow.
It is starting an interesting twist with the other children, I am sure that sooner or later he is going to run into some that are not going to be as compliant.
Keep up the good work.
Ric
Just finished chapter 6 and glad to read it overall. I was not happy with the assault on Graeme, he doesn’t deserve it. He seems to be growing well. Darrylle will be having a grand surprise come next chapter.
Do want to say thanks for writing this story,
Ric