Beneath the Mask Discussion Page:
Dear Reader’s:
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Hello everyone,
Let me get this thread going here and hopefully when you come in you will add your thoughts about what I had to say or the others readers comments. As you all know we just had another posting of this saga and I have gotten a lot of feed back from you guys on it aleady. It has been good feed back and let me tell you a little of what I think we are going to do here in this story.
First, Ashton is going to get caught, but he is going to stick around a little longer to continue making trouble. He is not a good guy and his dismiese might be as bad as Marth’s from “Shadow of My Father”, or maybe not. I am evil and I might just have him out there for a while keeping you guys wondering what in the world is going to happen with him.
Alex is really growing into a better guy and I cannot wait when he actually does get out of high school. Do not think he is going to stick with just the print shop that cannot grow anywhere. Things are going to a get a lot brighter for him with the help of his friends, Jacob, family and everything in between. Now there is going to be bumps in the road along the way, like everything else in life. So there stick around as well and find out what is going to happen.
All the minor chacters are going to come back full strength, but here is where I need your help. What do you think we should do with Steve and Robert. With Matt’s cousin that came out of no where. Alex’s little brothers and of course the new house. These areas give me your thoughts on where you would like the plots to go. I have always taken my readers ideas and used them the majority of the time.
Tell me what you think of the story so far here and if what has been written is believable to you as the readers. Please take advantage of this page and let me know your thoughts on everything on this saga. Until I pop in again, take care one and all.
I would like to see Alexs little brothers and cousins become friends with Jerremy, Jacobs older brother. This could be a feel good plot one where kindness and friendship over comes mistrust and fear of the unknown Jeremy is already in the story but only through Alex. Alex has tried to get the others in jacobs house to understand Jeremy, so why not use the younger ones to do the job. show the dynamic four excepting and understanding Jeremy bring him into some of thier time. show Ismaul learning how to talk to jeremy then have the others following him. you could also get Adam from Regrets and Heart aches to help the four learn how to talk sign that way Alex and Jacob are not being stretched even more than they are now. this would also give Adam more depth in charactor. Jeremy and the dynamic four could be your tention breaker when the story become to dark or tence.
I was just wondering when you are going to bring Bobby de Polo back into the story, he and Alex became somewhat friends, or atleast allies, it will be interesting how you will set him into play (gay,bi), I always look forward to all of your stories.
I’d like to see Matt being called Matthew more often. It would make for a more defined contrast between their 2 words. Maybe have Alex keep tabs on the Mexican Mafia through his maternal grandfather? That should lead to a huge (but not love-ending!!!!) fight between Matthew and Alex. Use Ashton being in J-town for that maybe?
There’s more to this relationship then you’ve written so far. I like how Alex has taken to Jeremy very much. Please keep writing!
kind regards
Maarten de Kroon